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Don't say hello
If you can't
Handle a goodbye,

Put up with the rain,
Hide your broken memories
With tears the rain hides..

Misery comes,
Love, pain happiness..
Fades

If a hello comes again..
The goodbye..
Wasn't the last one
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skaggzy Oct 3, 2012  Professional General Artist
I loved it, you kicked off the poem perfectly and ended the same way... I write poems, as well. So, I rarely read, but not out of disrespect. I just hate reading. I know that's bad for a writer to admit that. I started a group the other day... it caters not just to poetry, but the traditional "arts" as well. If you would like to join I'll give you the link AND you would be the first member. :) Here's the link [link]
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FireeHeart Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks,and I'll check out the group :)
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I liked your poem!:D
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FireeHeart Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank You :)
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